evil man brooke 100 wc

The giant ugly man was coming closer and closer he was watching the tow people.  The two people were sked so they phone the police and they said to the police there was a man watching us help so the police came.  The police told them to go home so they did the man was behind them so they ran but the man was still running after them they got home safe. When the tow people came out of their home the man was there with his weapons. The people ran back inside but the man smash the windows help.

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  1. Ms Woodgate (Team100WC) Maidstone,UK

    Hello Brooke,

    Well done for entering this week’s 100 WC. You carried on with the scary theme well, creating a lot of tension. This is an action packed story, full of excitement. Take care to read through your work to spot spelling and punctuation errors as this can spoil good writing.

    Keep up the good work.

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