Callum’s 100 word challenge

The man’s shadow got closer and closer until you could see the full face of the cute little. “Is anyone there” The small little girl said. Behind the two people a murderer a criminal stabbed them till death. The murderer   walked off with a smirk. The only witness was the girl. No one ever believed here as the murderer walked off with them. The headline off the newspaper was Girl witnessed murder

This very bad news had been around the world in seconds. Families were crying and sobbing because of this. He will do it again.

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  1. Mrs Neale, Team 100WC

    Oh my goodness, what terrible events Callum! You have written a great post for the 100WC. You built tension into your story using the idea that a shadow slowly came closer. I love your extra details – the small girl, the smirk, – all helping the reader to build the picture. But best of all I love the hanging threat at the end that he will strike again. You left me wanting to know more and wanting to read the next chapter!
    Keep on reading and keep up the super writing!

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