Aniekan and Harvey 100wc #13

He came closer and closer but never stopped, he paused for a moment. He stared me in the eye. My heart was pounding so much that it felt like it was going to jump out of my chest. He chased me through the woods my son raced past me like a flash of lightning. An ugly face stared at me when I turned around to see if he was still chasing me. His skull was browed and dry like a rock; he had no teeth but he could talk like a human. He pointed his gun at me then BANG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  1. Debbie (Team 100WC) Liverpool

    Wow, what a dramatic ending! You have used some good descriptions. I particularly liked ‘my heart was pounding so much that it felt like it was going to jump out of my chest’. It all built up the tension and drama of the story to reach the…. BANG!

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