100 word challenge THE INSPECTORS

“ what do you mean you know this place?”

“I’ve seen it somewhere, somewhere in a vision” Tim explained

They walked in the ramshackled house and inspected it.

“ there is nobody here, not one movement in the house” Bob exclaimed


“ what was that?” Bob whispered

“I-I-I-It’s him” Tim stuttered

“ I shall get you and when I do I shall kill you painfully” the mysterious voice echoed through the house “AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!” they both screamed. The door shut behind them again. “ha ha ha” “ you should have seen yourselves”

“ Jim?”


One thought on “100 word challenge THE INSPECTORS

  1. Claire Radd (Team 100WC)

    Hi there Jadon!
    I really like the comic twist that you added to you 100WC! It was especially effective because your build up was so good. Lots of ambitious adjectives meaning fantastic description.
    I’m always impressed when people write speech as the rules for writing it are so tricky! Well done you!
    Keep up the good work 🙂
    Mrs Radd (Team 100WC)

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